Sunday, May 24, 2015

Cover Letter






To Dean Griffith:
The enthusiasm for education that you exhibited makes me want to keep learning.
The kindness and care that you showed me, makes me want to pass it on.
You will be sorely missed but may your light live on.
I am grateful for having known you.  You helped make me a better person.




Rhode-Elise St. Jacques
Professor Peele
ENGL B5700 Introduction to Composition and Rhetoric
Portfolio Cover Letter
May 19, 2015

In this e-portfolio, the reader will find the all of the work I completed this semester in English B5700 Introduction to Composition and Rhetoric arranged from recent to last.  This arrangement is so readers can find the assignments without much difficulty.  I chose this platform because I found it accessible and easy to navigate.  I did not, however, foresee the limitations.  Blogger does not allow for easy inclusion of my classmates’ and professor’s comments.  However because it is a fairly comprehensible platform, I am pleased to have chosen it.

When I signed up for Introduction to Composition and Rhetoric, I knew the work would be challenging, but as a prospective teacher of writing, I believed that the information I would learn would be valuable.  Therefore, I enrolled expecting that by the end of the course, the information I would have learned would affect my teaching practice. 

Every week in this class, I have practiced critical reading of scholarship and research on the subject of composition and rhetoric, and I wrote essays that apply to those theories in order to analyze the published texts and offer my observations.  One of my favorite readings this semester was Sara Webb-Sunderhaus’s “A Family Affair: Competing Sponsors of Literacy in Appalachian Students’ Lives.”  This article helped me view my students holistically and understand that there are various factors that affect their performance in the classroom including their relationships with family members who at times inhibit their success in the classroom.  The article talked about a student who had to lose a year of school due to illness and another whose marital issues made it difficult for her to continue her schooling.

Webb-Sunderhaus’s article made me see that, as stated in my Blackboard response:
Though we may want to do whatever it takes to help our students, as teachers, our resources may be limited.  We cannot provide marital rescue nor can we provide cures for diseases.  But we can encourage our students in other ways.

Those other ways include leading them to the proper resources.  The article reminded me of the times when in college, certain familial difficulties, such as my mother’s health and my family’s overall financial constraints, made being able to focus in school a challenge.  Though my professors were unable to fix my personal problems, they were able to lead me to resources, such as to the department of student affairs, where I was able to get the help that I needed.

One of the best aspects about English B5700 was using digital literacies for classroom discussions.  These allowed me much deeper understanding of the reading materials.  For our eight blog post, I had difficulty replying because I was not sure I understood the readings for that week.  On the discussion board I posted, “my reason for not having a traditional response today is that I do not understand the reading.  I have a lot of questions.” 

It was difficult for me to admit my confusion because I felt that I was not participating in the discussion.  One classmate appeased me by admitting that she, too, had not quite understood the readings.  The professor answered my questions and that made me feel somewhat better because I realized that my limited understanding of the readings was accurate.  Though having to respond to the readings every week was at times challenging, the discussions that our responses generated were very helpful to me this semester.

The course required that students conduct independent research on any topic involving language and literacy.  I chose to research the best pedagogical practices for teaching English to speakers of other languages.  This project allowed me to acquire a strong knowledge base of contemporary English Second Language theory.  I was also required to write a twenty-page report of my findings.  In this report, I listed the theories of English language instruction that I learned.  Some of the different methods include adding music to the adult ESL classroom, taking adult ELLs (English language learners) on field trips in order to help them acquire vocabulary and better acclimate in their new culture and allowing ELLs to choose from a variety of writing prompts so they will be more likely to perform well on tests.

One of the most valuable lessons I learned which helped me gain a deeper understanding of my goals as a teacher is how to grade student papers. Throughout the semester, we discussed evaluating student papers for content and valuing process and not just product.

For our tenth post, I shared that I had recently graded papers for a freshman composition course in which the students mostly earned Cs.  They were very upset and I felt terrible.  That was a pivotal week for me because though I stuck to my decisions, having been given an assessment rubric from which to base my evaluations, I realized that the system is broken.  Students are expected to deliver in an area they were not taught.  I know that when I become an instructor, I will have to grade for grammar, but I believe that I will not penalize my students for what I have not taught them and do my best to set them up for success.


Overall, Introduction to Composition and Rhetoric was a worthy class.  I hope that the lessons that I learned will serve me as continue on my path to adult education.

Research Paper

Rhode-Elise St. Jacques
Professor Peele
ENGL B5700 Introduction to Composition and Rhetoric
May 19, 2015

Best Practices for English Second Language Instruction

Introduction
When during the summer of 2012 I started a new job as a teacher’s assistant in the English department at Medgar Evers College, I was excited for this new opportunity and challenge.  My responsibilities included providing individual and small group tutoring and teaching reading and writing workshops to help students prepare for the CUNY reading and writing assessment exams. 
Once the summer session ended, I was asked to continue in my new position and thus my career in adult education began.  I took pleasure in this new path, helping students as best as I am able.  In my classes have always been immigrant students from various countries, who speak various tongues.  These students, on average, work harder than their peers.  They are always present at the tutoring center and stay after class for more direction.  Yet, they struggle the most to understand the subject.  Many, even a few who were in remedial English when I started this job three years ago, remain in remedial courses today as they are not able to meet the English literacy standards needed to move on to credit-bearing courses.
The topic of teaching adult English language learners (ELLs) is interesting to me because as a prospective teacher, I will have many ELLs in my classroom.  I want to know how to best serve them.  And although an English language learner as well, I have never grappled with the English language; I do not identify with my students’ struggle.  Nevertheless, I identify with their desires for a better life through education.  I immigrated to the United States as a child and brought with me a love of learning, gifted to me by my father, which steadily progressed over the years.  I credit my English proficiency not only on having settled in the United States at a young age but mostly on having led a lifestyle of reading.  This has motivated me to continually advise my English language learners to also adopt a lifestyle of reading.  Though some have taken my advice, I recognize that a sudden interest in reading will not yield the level of English proficiency necessary for college success during a 14-week semester.  Therefore, I want to learn the best teaching methods to utilize to teach these students.
Statement of the Problem
While there exists a myriad of studies on young English language learners, which characterizes their unique traits, lists their needs and provides theoretical framework for instruction, when it comes to adult learners of English, research is lacking (Mathews-Aydinli 2008).  Furthermore, these students enter the classroom with an already low-literacy level in their home languages, which makes it more difficult for them to acquire literacy in a new language.  This, along with various life issues, often leads this population drop out of school at an exorbitant rate (Lee and Sheared 2002). 
English language learners come in many different shapes and sizes from various lands, backgrounds and circumstances.  Some are in the United States on temporary F1 Visas and once having acquired a level of English proficiency, continue their education in their home countries.  Some are refugees.  Some do not possess residency papers and are in the United States illegally.  Some are green card holders and others have become naturalized American citizens.  It is also important to note that some English language learners are born in the United States but because they spoke languages other than English prior to entering school, they were placed in ESL courses where they learned English.  I was unable to find research on the linguistic particularities of these learners once they reach adulthood.
What all adult ELLs have in common is a desire and a need for better English proficiency.  But because there exists such much diversity among them, it is often difficult to conclude what qualifies as good practice.
Purpose Statement
The purpose of this research was to discover the best pedagogical recommendations currently available for implementation by instructors of adult ESL.  This study also sought to discover appropriate methods for the different literacy levels of these learners.
Research Questions
The primary question of this research was: what are the best pedagogical strategies to instruct adult ELLs.  To be able to respond to their particular needs, it is important to understand their unique characteristics.  Therefore, this research also sought to discover the exceptional challenges faced by this group of leaners.
Methodology
To answer my questions, I assembled several articles on this subject.  I then provide summaries of each article, focusing on the suggested instructional methodologies.  Then, I go on to impart my reactions and interpretations.
Literature Review
In her article “Overlooked and Understudied? A Survey of Current Trends in Research on Adult English Language Learners,” Julie Mathews-Aydinli states that not enough research has been conducted on adult English Language Learners enrolled in not-for-credit English courses.  She goes on to say that the existing research is often lacking “a theoretical base and thus remains disconnected from each other” (199), making it challenging to ascertain the exceptional characteristics and needs of adult ELLs.  Therefore, creating curricula and pedagogical approaches specific for this group of learners is challenging.  This is an issue as many of these students drop out of their English courses at an extremely high rate.  Fortunately, she goes on to say, dissertations on this group have been on the rise.  As this continues, it will hopefully lead to an increase in published works as well.
The Conference on College Composition and Communication (CCCC) acknowledges the need for improved pedagogical practices to meet the needs of adult ELLS.  In their 2001 article “CCCC Statement on Second-Language Writing and Writers,” the writers recognize that the number of ELLs in the classroom is growing; therefore, administrators should take bold steps in creating programs that will set adult ELLs on the path to success.  The writers urge administrators to recognize that language acquisition for ELLs is a “time-consuming process that will continue through students’ academic career and beyond” (669).  Therefore, programs created must see to the entire academic success of these students.  Administrators must first be certain that their instructors are well trained.  They must then provide continuing professional development and resource materials to their instructors so they can remain well-informed with new and current perspectives on the teaching of adult ELLs.
ELLs should be placed in writing courses based on their writing assessment scores and neither due to their speaking abilities nor their cultural backgrounds.  Assessment exams should be free of writing prompts that contain cultural references lest the ELL student is not familiar with them.  Students should be evaluated through several domains.  Further, students should be given a variety of writing prompts to select from in order to be confident about their abilities to fulfill the writing instructions.  Classes should be small, with no more than 15 students to facilitate individual attention.
When students exit the ESL classroom, CCCC advocates that they continue to be supported as scoring out of ESL courses does not mean that these students are then completely proficient and need no more language support.  Instead of enrolling in regular freshman composition courses, there should be special writing courses tailored to ELLs which will then be used to fulfill the writing requirement.  Furthermore, instead of being required to take a foreign language class, former ESL students should be required to enroll in yet another writing course tailored to their needs.  This course should take the place of the foreign language requirement.
The CCCC suggests that graduate programs that are preparing writing teachers must also include ESL training.  ELLs are found in regular composition classroom with mainstream students.  It is therefore important that instructors are well-prepared.
Though the research may be scant, there does exist several theories on the best teaching practices for adult ELLs.  The authors of the 2002 article, “Socialization and Immigrant Students’ Learning in Adult Education Programs” start by declaring that not much has been written on the differences in culture, language and learning types among adult immigrant students.  The go on to say that the “literature that addresses the impact of formal and informal socialization on immigrants and second language learners is even more limited” (27).  This article was written for instructors of adult ESL in order to provide them solid recommendations to successfully meet the needs of adult immigrant learners.  To begin to seek appropriate instructional strategies for adult ELLs, however, they believe it is important to first know the narratives of these students.  As such, Ming-Yeh Lee and Vanessa Sheared in provide a brief lesson on the history of immigrants in the United States. 
The authors recognize that the American promise of a better life was never intended for people of color or for those whose first language is not English.  The first immigration laws in the United States, enacted in 1790, provided citizenship rights to free whites only.  Later, several acts forbade Chinese and Japanese immigrants from not only entering the United States but those already in the country were not allowed citizenship rights.
In the late nineteenth to the early twentieth centuries several acculturation programs were established to strip immigrants of their ethical identities so they could become more Americanized.  The purpose of adult ESL courses at the time were not to simply teach English but were intended to indoctrinate their students.  These manipulative agendas were eliminated after World War II. 
Because they came to the United States from different lands and for different reasons, those immigrants came from varying educational and socioeconomic conditions.  Those that were more educated and wealthy were able to transition more easily into the American culture.  For their counterparts, government aid and intervention were greatly needed. 
Lee and Sheared believe that different cultural backgrounds of immigrant students affect their learning.  Cultural models, which the authors define as “the system of cultural knowledge, values, beliefs, and behavior norms acquired by people belonging to a particular cultural group” (30) refers to the actions taken by different groups and how they construct meaning.  It is important to keep in mind that particular cultural models may not necessarily wholly apply to each member of any given group.  However, being aware that cultural models exist can provide instructors with better understanding of how “formal and informal socialization affect one’s learning preference, interaction, and expectations in an adult classroom setting” (30).  Instructors must keep in mind that these models can contrast those in an American classroom which can cause immigrant learners to experience cultural discontinuity or culture shock.
            Cultural discontinuity “often causes [students] to feel marginalized, confused and isolated” (30) which can in turn negatively affect their views of themselves as students in an American classroom and negatively impact their academic performance.  Discomfort in the classroom, the authors believe, is one reason why immigrant and minority students tend to drop out of school at an alarming rate.  They add that it is not this cultural incongruence alone that causes students to quit but how instructors handle the cultural gap.
            The authors stress the importance of understanding voluntary vs involuntary immigrants but do not offer in depth definitions of these terms.  They label involuntary those who immigrated to the United States through slavery, colonization and conquests (31), implying that involuntary immigrants are people of color.  But they do not offer in depth descriptions about people of color who immigrate to the United States today.  Further, they imply that voluntary immigrants are white and are therefore better able to assimilate into American culture.  They do not account for white immigrants who come from eastern European countries and speak languages other than English as either voluntary or involuntary.
Lee and Sheared share that instructors must create an inclusive environment for their adult ELLs.  They go on to provide several suggestions as to how this can be accomplished.  First, instructors must include topics which are not only of the interests of their students but essential to their quotidian lives.  They must then recognize the importance of an inclusive curriculum which embraces stories and texts representing the various cultural backgrounds of the students in the classroom and tell of their historical narratives.  Enacting these elements enables all of the students to “began to understand how Euro-centered discourse has presented distorted stories about themselves as well as others” (32).  An inclusive curriculum allows students to learn about each other’s cultures and dispel any stereotypes. 
            To create an atmosphere of community in the class room, instructors must generate activities that encourage participation such as having students form panels, discuss and brainstorm ideas, role play, and generate photo sharing activities.  These, the authors contend, can allow students to share their personal histories with each other. 
              This topic of inclusion is of importance to the authors particularly for Lee, who as an adult ELL, understands the feeling of exclusion in the classroom.  She discloses that during the first semester of her doctoral studies while working in a group, one student impatiently expressed her frustration about Lee’s constant silence.  The outburst of Lee’s group mate was followed by a brief silence then the discussion went on.  However for Lee, this was a pivotal moment.  She comes from a culture where students are generally silent in the classroom as a sign of respect.  She had thought that she had assimilated well enough in American culture only to realize at that moment she had not.  This led her to feel ostracized in her environment.
While different cultures have different classroom etiquette, many also have different models of literacy which affect how students from those cultures learn English in an American setting.  The authors of the 2008 article, “Working with Adult English Language Learners with Limited Literacy: Research, Practice, and Professional Development,” Miriam Burt, Joy Kreeft Peyton, and Kirsten Schaetzel, announce that the literacy levels of the native languages of almost half of adult learners studying English are between beginner to high beginner.  Because most ELLs come to the United States having had very basic or no formal education in their homelands, the challenge of educating these students is great.
The demographics of these learners is wide as they come from different countries, speak different languages, are employed in various occupations and have been living in the United States for different amounts of time.  Having provided statistical information on different literacy levels, the authors focus their paper on three types of ESLs, preliterate learners, whose “native language has no written form or is in the process of developing a written form (e.g., many American indigenous, African, Australian, and Pacific languages),” non-literate learners, who “have no access to literacy instruction” and semiliterate learners who have had “limited access to literacy instruction” (1).  For these groups of learners, the researchers recommend practices that build on vocabulary.  To do this, they recommend that teachers first discover the interests of their students and include those in their curricula.  Instructors must build on the schemata and the experiences of their students by selecting reading passages and graphics relating to topics familiar to the learners and references that are related to their daily lives.  Activities should place a high emphasis on vocabulary building and instructors must encourage familial involvement in literacy activities.
Because teaching this population of Ells is a challenging task, the writers suggests that instructors must participate in continual professional development workshops.  They should take specialized courses and join a community of practitioners for continual pedagogical development.
For those adult students enrolled in English courses, being proficient in the language is not enough.  Having a high level of education is necessary in order to achieve a lifestyle free of economic constraints.  Though without English proficiency, pursuing education is at best difficult.  In their 2009 article, “Assessing the Literacy Skills of Adult Immigrants and Adult English Language Learners,” researchers Heide Spruck Wrigley, Jing Chen, Sheida White, and Jaleh Soroui state that “English fluency along with twelve years of education can result in a 76 percent increase in earnings” (6).  They go on to say that those who are fluent in English but have less than eight years of education only see only a four percent income increase.  The most troubling data the researchers report is that the language skills and specific needs of this group of learners are not well known, echoing Mathews-Aydinli. 
              For those learners past the semiliterate level, the 2009 article, “Best Practices for Teaching the ‘Whole’ Adult ESL Learner,” by David Schwarzer, makes the claim that when it comes to second language acquisition, the productive skills, speaking and writing, were viewed as more important than the receptive skills, listening and reading.  He goes on to say that now, it is now being recognized that all four aspects are necessary and must be integrated during instruction. 
              Schwarzer writes that it is important that instructors teach grammar to facilitate understanding during conversation.  However, much of his article is focused on vocabulary building strategies.  He believes that having a wide vocabulary is the first step in achieving proficient skills as a speaker of a second language. 
              Schwarzer offers various methods instructors can utilize to enrich the vocabularies of their students.  One method Schwarzer suggests is including television programs in the curriculum.  Television, Schwarzer writes, offers many opportunities for incidental vocabulary learning.  Teachers should encourage their students to watch shows which will also teach them about the American culture.  There should be class discussions about these shows to encourage oral production of language. 
         Schwarzer identifies reading as a good way to build vocabulary.  He suggests that instructors have their students read much and read widely.  The reading materials must be challenging, slightly above the current proficiencies of students. They must be of interests to the students and of significance to their daily lives.  This way, students will not only be more inclined to read the materials but also have more to contribute to class discussions.
         The lives of adult ESL students are constantly changing.  Their responsibilities as parents and caretakers sometimes lead them to change jobs and to relocate.  Depending on these external factors, their enthusiasms about wanting to learn English often change as well.  Therefore, Schwarzer suggests, it is important that instructors of adult ESL understand what motivates their students.  He goes on to say that there are two types of motivation, “‘integrative motivation’ (willingness to learn a new language in order to become part of a particular speaking community) and ‘instrumental motivation’ (willingness to learn a new language to accomplish immediate goals and needs)” (27).  Once instructors are aware of the integrative and instrumental motivations of their students, they can include these in their lessons.  For example, when instructors know that their students want to learn how to understand their utility bills, or are having difficulty finding jobs and apartments, they can teach lessons on understanding the different parts of utility bills or on analyzing the classifieds.  This approach is important as it can help keep the students’ desire to learn English from waning.
         It is important that instructors create an environment of community in their classrooms.  Doing so encourages students to utilize their newly learned skills through interaction.  Instructors should form small groups and pairs among their students where they can practice paraphrasing, questioning, drawing conclusion, constructing meaning, all skills needed for effective communication.
         Schwarzer believes that teaching the whole adult ESL learner means viewing students as spouses, parents, church attendees, employees and so on.  This allows instructors to recognize their students as “accomplishments, responsibilities, relationships, personal histories and hopes” (28).  He goes on to say that this approach allows the instructor and the learner to be more likely to view language as whole rather than chunks, studying it in contexts rather than in isolated pieces such as studying grammar alone.  Instructors will assign whole texts, chapters and passages rather than individualized words, isolated sentences or paragraphs.
         The author goes on to reiterate, with the aforementioned researchers, the importance of instruction that is meaningful.  Class lessons must be immediately serviceable to the lives of learners.  Instructors must permit learners to share their cultures with the classroom while learning about the American culture.  Furthermore, instructors must communicate to their students that language learning is progressive and it takes time.  Evaluating language learning should take place through various assessment methods and not simply standardized tests.
         Instructors must recognize that their students are adults and communicate to them the value of their opinions and points of view.  As such, students must be allowed to choose learning and discussion topics, having been provided with several learning materials from which to select.  Instructors must encourage their students to ask questions, about the television programming they watch and from the texts they read, then work on finding the answers to these questions.  Schwarzer urges instructors to “build” the classroom along with their students, by inviting them to bring materials from home such as furniture, storage units, pictures and anything else that would make the classroom feel like home to students.
         Adult ESL students are often well-educated in their own countries; many were even practicing professionals in various fields.  Therefore, instructors must take advantage of the various know-hows of their students by calling on them to share their knowledge through assignments requiring that they prepare presentations in which they share their former professions with their classmates.  This will allow them to not only practice their newly learned language skills but also to acquire new vocabulary.
              Having a clear and consistent class routine with consistent procedures yields to student independence.  These procedures should be explicitly written on classroom bulletin boards and can include the learning goals for the day and the different activities done during class.  Routines not only help learners to depend on themselves but also to be more motivated about learning.
         Fieldtrips, Schwarzer contends, provide real opportunities for students to learn about the American culture and acquire incidental vocabulary.  Trips need not be to expensive and extravagant locations, but can be to museums, the public library and even the supermarket and hospitals.  Schwarzer urges instructors to keep in mind that while these locations may seem common place, they may be unfamiliar to their students.  Furthermore, instructors should take advantage of the various texts available within these locations, such as pamphlets and brochures, to encourage literacy. 
In the 2009 article “Journaling in an Adult ESL Literacy Program” by Clarena Larrotta, the author shares her experience implementing dialogue journals in her ESL classrooms.  Dialogue journals are simply notebooks used by instructors and learners as a means of communication.  The journal communication between instructor and students takes place on a weekly basis.  Journals are not evaluated for grammar or mechanics encouraging, students to write freely without worrying if they “sound right.”
           Larrotta explains how she implements this technique as a framework for other instructors.  She starts the dialogue by writing an introductory letter to her students and ending with two questions to which her students must respond.  She allows the students to take the letters home, write their responses and two questions then return the letters to her the following class.  In the students’ notebooks, she replies to their responses and questions and this practice continues for the remainder of the term.  As she does not correct grammar in their journals, in her responses, Larrotta models proper sentence construction and grammar.
           Larrotta along with her students decide on rules such the types of questions appropriate to pose after each response.  She implements guided practice by tackling the mechanical issues she notices in her students’ journals during classwork.  Lastly, she evaluates the journals along with the learners by having them write what they enjoy about the dialogue journal approach and what do not enjoy.  Generally, students have reported finding pleasure in reading Larrotta’s responses and in being able to write freely.  However, at times, some report that they would like it if she corrected their papers.  While intended to help learners, dialogue journals also tend to be a pleasant activity for instructors as reading their students’ writings allows instructors to get to know their students better and assess their learning. 
           Dialogue journals are successful, Larrotta contends, because they allow learners to write about matters important to them.  Topics her students have written about include immigration, employment and general concerns about life in the United States.  These topics allow for wide discourse between learner and student and often lead to new topics.  As they write about their families, their goals and their ambitions, Larrotta does so as well as she wants her students to view her as a participant and not just their instructor.
Larrotta shares that she believes in constant interaction between instructor and learner to promote learning and the dialogue journals have allowed her the opportunity to do so.  She has learned a lot about herself as an instructor and that has affected her teaching.  For instance, she realized that she was too controlling as an instructor, being the one to solely decide conversation topics with no input from students.  These journals have not offered opportunity for growth for students only, but they have taught Larrotta to improve her teaching and better serve her students.
              On the practice of dialogue journals, Richard A. Orem agrees with Larrotta and echos her belief that they offer much to instructors and their students.  In his 2001 article “Journal Writing in Adult ESL: Improving Practice through Reflective Writing, Orem maintains that dialogue journals should not be graded but that teachers should respond in a way that models standard written English.  Orem, however believes that instructors can communicate to their students how well they are applying their learning in their journals.  Further, when instructors notice mechanical errors in their students’ journals, teachers can use it as an opportunity to bring these errors to students’ attention and for further instruction.
            Orem warns instructors to be aware that students may write about sensitive life issues in their journals.  As such, instructors must assure their students that their entries will be kept confidential and in turn must express sensitivity when students write about difficult or deeply personal topics.  He goes on to say that, whenever possible, instructors can use these journals to inform their students about appropriate available resources.
Orem further believes that dialogue journals should be kept among teachers of adult ESL.  He reports that keeping a teaching journal has allowed him many opportunities for self-reflection which has improved his pedagogical practice and in turn has positively influenced his teaching.  For instance, his journaling taught him that he has judged his students as a whole and not taken into consideration their individual learning styles. That realization has forced him to differentiate his teaching and reach more students. 
Orem recognizes that for instructors, keeping dialogue journals is an involved task.  However, he maintains the rewards are great, particularly for part time ESL teachers who work in contexts such as libraries, church basements and community centers.  They often lack the opportunity to interact with their peers.  Therefore, learning from other practitioners does not happen as frequently as it should.  For them, Orem suggests that program directors urge their teachers to keep a collective journal for the purpose of improving each other’s practice.
            He suggests that teachers select topics for discussion which can include teaching strategies, student responses or interactions between teachers and students.  They should write their observations immediately following their classes and make these notes available to other teachers in the writing group for instant response.  Teachers should then meet weekly to discuss their journal entries and responses.  Because teachers are often isolated from each other, Orem suggests that virtual discussion boards be utilized.
At the time her article was written Kristin Lems had been an ESL instructor of adults for over 20 years.  In that time, she had taught ELLs of all levels in different contexts.  She asserts that including music in the ESL classroom has yielded positive results for students and for her.  In her 2005 article, “Music Works:  Music for Adult English Language Learners,” Lems starts out by admitting that there has not been much research on the effects of music and language learning and “even less with a focus on adults” (14).  However, of the ones that are available, she goes on to provide brief synopses of their findings. 
Lems reports on a study that found that in the human brain, dominant aspects of music and language are located in close proximity.  She reports that in a French language immersion program that took place in Canada, musical concepts and patterns were included daily in the students’ scholarly programs.  At the end of the study, those students in the language and music program outperformed their peers who studied the language with no music component.  The students exhibited much more interest in school activities in general.
Lems contends that the most efficient music for increased language production is pop music because these songs contain frequently occurring vocabulary.  Pop music encourages students to continually practice newly learned vocabulary, even when they are away from the classroom, by encouraging students to sing these songs to themselves repeatedly.
An important aspect of including music in the ESL classroom is that it allows groups of diverse ELL students who might be lacking in vocabulary to share their cultures with one another.  Having students share their different cultures with their peers in the class is beneficial as it allows various myths to be dispelled.
A benefit of music is it can help students learn and practice proper English pronunciation.  By examining song parts, word parts, instructors can have students identify when letters sound different then they should  such as the letter ‘t’ in city. 
Music can be used to encourage writing.  Lems discloses that when she teaches higher level beginner students, she teaches them the song “El Condor Pasa” which in the lyrics there is a line that says “I’d rather be a sparrow than a snail” (Simon, Milchburth, and Robles, 2003).  She then asks her students to write their own sentences using the construction:  “I’d rather be __________ than _____________” (18).
Further writing activities include asking students to write about their favorite songs by first providing background information and sharing why the songs are meaningful to them.  Students then must bring the song/music to class to share with their classmates.  She has further assigned students comparative biographical writing assignments about two or more of their favorite artists, presenting their findings using Venn diagrams. 
Reading song lyrics allows students to improve their reading comprehension, build vocabulary and to better understand the American culture.  Lems ends her article with a call to action that more ESL programs include music in their curricula.
When it comes to exams, strategy that can help adult ELLs perform better and eliminate possible test anxiety is allowing them extra time to complete their exams.  The authors, Eleni Pappamihiel, Takayuki Nishimata and Florin Mihai report in their article, “Timed Writing and Adult English-Language Learners: An Investigation of First Language Use in Invention Strategies,” that learners enrolled in ESL courses should be allowed supplemental time to complete tasks.  While some programs do not impose time restrictions at all for ELLs, when these adult learners score out of ESL courses, the accommodations of extra time or no time restriction is removed.  It is important, the researchers believe, that though they may no longer need specialized ESL courses, that these accommodations remain as that English is not their first language remains a factor. 
Data analysis
A recurrent theme provided by the authors was the importance of community in the ESL classroom.  This communicates that without a sense of community, adult learners will feel isolated and devalued and will not be encouraged to continue their learning.  Another suggestion prevalent in the articles is having students work in groups to practice their newly learned skills.  While this is great advice, the authors neglect to specify that groups should be heterogeneous.  To discourage students from working with their friends or other students from the same or similar backgrounds, instructors should be the ones to form the groups.  These groups can be permanent or instructors can put their students in new heterogeneous groups in the middle of the term.  This way, students can come into contact with the most cultures outside of their own in the classroom.
I found Schwarzer’s suggestion that instructors take students to field trips to be worthy of implementing.  While he recommends common places like the library and the supermarket, I argue that having students visit touristic areas and landmarks is of value as well.  These locations encourage students to encounter terms and vocabulary that they would likely not come across while introducing them to their new culture in a new way.  While reading about the Statue of Liberty, for example, might introduce students to new information, visiting the Statue of Liberty will make the information meaningful and allow students to hold on to newly learned facts longer.
What was missing in the research is how computers in the ELL classroom can affect learning.  It is my belief that many instructors are not computer savvy therefore do not utilize them when teaching.  However, computers can add greatly to the ELL classroom by modeling writing and proper orthography.  Computers can enhance the practice of dialogue journals.  Instructors can create discussion boards which would allow all students to participate in the discussion of a given subject.  Lastly, having students use computers will allow them to learn an important skill which can be valuable to them later in the workforce
Conclusions and Implications
I found many of the suggestions that the articles offered to be fascinating as they were new to me.  While reading these articles, I pictured myself as an ESL teacher, putting into practice these various recommendations.  I believe that many of these suggestions, such as having students work in groups and allowing them to voice their opinions, can and should be used in many different classrooms, not just adult ESL classrooms. 
I was surprised to find out that research in this field is lacking.  However, that there exist many certificate and graduate programs for adult ESL instruction, makes me optimistic that research in this area is growing.  This will lead to more published works for teachers and prospective teachers. 

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In “Uncommon Ground: Narcissistic Reading and Material Racism,” Barbara Schneider starts out by first relating an experience she had teaching a summer composition class to a group of underprepared, inner-city, new college students.  Immediately, she noticed that the students segregated themselves into groups with which they most identified. 
The topic for discussion was racism and segregation.  Schneider produced two essays, bell hooks’s “Keeping Close to Home: Class and Education,” in which she describes her experience moving from one community to another vastly different one.  Schneider also chose for discussion Mike Rose’s “I Just Wanna Be Average,” in which he describes his experience with vocational school. 
Schneider then asked that her students write a literacy narrative, chronicling their own journeys.  What they produced were shallow texts in which they tried to form and even force connections with hooks.
This led Schneider to realize that in order for our teaching to be transformational, we need to consider changing our instructional model.  We need to teach students rhetorical listening.  For that to happen, she proposes that students are asked to answer questions about texts that force them to be analytical. 
This model for instruction is appropriate for not only race discussions but for all and any controversial topic.  The types of questions that Schneider proposes instructors ask of their students put students in the place of the essayists (or even characters in a story).  These questions also encourage students to understand the institutional forces against the essayist or character thereby understanding his or her (essayist or character) struggles.  And if the essayist or character represents an idea contrary to the beliefs of the students, such as a student last semester that came to the learning center where I work distraught because she did not want to do an assignment on a book relating to homosexuality (Giovanni’s Room by James Baldwin) because this topic goes against her beliefs, having students put themselves in different contexts and questioning how we as a society come to believe what we believe can potential foster change in the minds of students.  This is what transformational learning is.
Though I am for this approach, I do not believe taking any one instructional perspective will eradicate bigotry in the hearts and minds of all students, particularly after one semester.  There are those students who are adamant and set in their beliefs and would rebel against being asked to question them, such as the anti-homosexual student in the learning center.  What this approach can accomplish is it can cause students (those willing to actually complete the assignment) to face their own prejudices and this might eventually lead to change.  This perspective is like planting seeds.

As for Joseph Harris’s “The Idea of Community in the Study of Writing,” I like that he talks about theories that challenge the idea of community in the classrooms, theories that suggest that writing communities can cause students to suppress their individualities for politeness sake.
He also argues that how we write is a result of the community or communities to which we belong.  In other words, our identities are linked to our communities and against that we cannot write.
When students enter college, they are then in a new community and they have to now understand their identities in this new communities. 
Students often struggle with writing because they are expected to perform in a set way (meaning write according to certain standards) and they have not yet had the time to understand the community that is college and who they are within it.
I struggled with this article, not because it was difficult but because time forced me to rush through it.  I am not sure if my understanding of it is correct so please, help me understand.

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In “Inventing the University” by David Bartholomae, he reports that the learning of writing is continuous.  He provides examples of basic writing students’ essays to illustrate their errors.  He argues that they lack knowledge of formal discourse, and this lack of knowledge keeps them from effectively communicating their ideas, particularly when they use language and phrases that they believe to be academic.

A couple of weeks ago I graded some freshman composition II papers and most of the students got a C.  A lot of these students were pretty upset and I am still carrying this with me.  I don’t think it’s fair to punish students for what we have not taught them.  One of the points made by the author that really interests me is that students should be taught to write with their readers in mind.  That is interesting to me because this idea of putting emphasis on the process and not the product when it comes to writing is still new to me.  I am asking myself how is this done and how is it done well?  Just recently the lead teacher in my freshman composition II class explained to students that one of the problems that is constant in their essays is that they assume the audience knows what they mean.  She told them that when they mention a character or a place for the first time, they must introduce said character or place because the reader does not necessarily know who or what those are.

On the surface this may seem like teaching students to write with their readers in mind but I think that writing with the reader in mind goes deeper than simply properly introducing characters and settings.  It also has to do with knowing the language of the reader and what is deemed appropriate. 

Teaching students to write with their readers in mind is not telling them, it is modeling which is not done enough.
 I found the tone of this essay a bit unsettling.  Did anyone else find his tone a bit sarcastic?  Also, this idea that students invent the university is confusing to me as well.  He says that students are inventing the university every time they write.  He also says that students must learn to speak the language of their disciplines.  Is that not conforming to the university and rather than inventing?


In “Grammar, Grammars, and the Teaching of Grammar’ by Patrick Hartwell, he talks about the teaching of grammar in the classroom.  He makes the distinction among five types of grammar.  Grammar one, he says, lies in the subconscious of all native speakers.  L1 speakers of a language knows what their language is supposed to sound like without knowing why.
I am a bit fuzzy, however, on the differences among grammars three to five.
With this article, it was hard to form an opinion.  I try drawing from my own experiences and from the experiences of others.  In the seventh grade I had been in the United States for two years.  I remember how excited I was in English class when we were being taught grammar.  I found it fascinating.  ("When the subject of a sentence is in the third person singular form, its subject takes an 's' or an 'es.'" I was blown away!)  
So much so, we were given workbooks to practice in.  Someone had written the answers in mind and I gave it back to the teacher and requested another workbook.
I have known many foreign students who in their country extensively studied English grammar.  As a result, though their vocabulary may be lacking, their knowledge of grammar surpasses that of some native speakers.  The teaching of grammar made a difference in my writing and total acquisition of English.  Grammar made a difference in the acquisition of English of those foreign students as well.  Why then do so many people say teaching grammar does not work?  Why did it work for me?  Or did?  Perhaps my love of reading helped...